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this life is dog earred

Ever since
evermore
it cant be and yet it wont be undone
everything
is sort of mothballed!

this life is dogearred
after you left me
like
an open book
on the sidewalk
of the last meeting place.

you smoked away ,sipping off
you ate and relished
and like slimy faced lotus leaves
you slipped out and vanished
you were
the last tear that fell out of my moonlight eye

I no longer burn in the cold moonlight
I no longer desire and ache
as these lonely  nights are better
than the pillows of  empty clouds you offered
darkness seems
my friend holding me in its arms
and I sleep in peace at last

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  • Kendal Palmer gold member
    October 23

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    very etheral in feel...mysterious and fantasy like. Nice job poet!! you have captured the essence of all of these and rolled them up neatly in your well penned write!! keep up the great work!! peace and light always, Kendal


  • xkadiex
    October 21
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    Different but I enjoyed it