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My Vampire love

Oh, this pain,
in love again.

Broken down,
twisted and bent.

Dont want to hurt,
dont want to die.

I want to love,
but i want to sigh.

Lost in chaos,
this mortal feeling.

Hard i try,
and love concealing.

Bring me down,
to the brink of death.

In our love,
you take my breath.

All I want is to,
feel this beat.

You have taken my heart,
I cry in defeat.






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  • Reyeze Darkwolf
    October 21

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    Amazing

    Whithered away you know I have won, But this battle has only begun. We share our love in darkness repressed, I can feel your heart fluttering within your chest. I welcome you unto thy world, Darkness incased; we share our fate!

    Tis an amazing piece of literature. I can only stare in mear amazment of how you oh so poetically express such emotion. Welcome to my dark side!