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Crouching Dreams

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Imagination's leap,
has come to a sudden halt.
He crouches his dreams
on an altar of skinned knees.

Weary of his travels,
calloused hands soothe a calloused foot.
As he momentarily ponders,
His heritage of great pain.

Author notes

Inspired by Crouching Boy By Michelangelo

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  • Ruben Ortellao
    October 21

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    Blowing my mind!

    Incredible write, Raul! This ekphrasis is fantastic...amazing!! I love the ending lines of each stanza! Michelangelo must be very proud of this poem! : ) Keep amusing me with your talent, my friend! Ruben.