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''love doesnt have a purpose'' right?
thats what yu said to me before yu withered away...
my default flower of the night

what joo think?

    I plan to revise this poem: please leave constructive criticism!
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  • Eots
    October 21

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    Wow. This is even better than your last...

    Naturally, the "yu" still bugs me some, but then... it's somehow poetic. I really, really, really, really, really, really love that last line. And the second. And the first.

    @_@

    Wow.

    I love it all, heh. Very well done.

    ~Eots of the Dark Knight Phonings of Coffee Untasted

  • exumethebroken
    October 21
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    moo