waiting in wondering of waiting for us
waiting in wanting and waiting for us
waiting waiting waiting
wanting in yearning of wanting for us
wanting in hoping and wanting for us
wanting wanting wanting
hoping in dreaming in hoping for us
hoping in waking in hoping for us
hoping hoping hoping
waking in reaching in waking to us
waking in holding in waking to us
waking waking waking
holding in waking in hoping in wanting
wondering in yearning in dreaming in reaching
in waiting in wanting in hoping in waking
to us
my Love
Author notes
Woven middle words second lines; middle words first lines; first words all lines, in the last stanzas to one melody of love and of vibrant life. No matter which way, all the words make sense.
Written to the Music of Sarah (Gossip in the Grain) sung by Ray LaMontagne. PLEASE LISTEN! Wondrous, deep, motion of swell.
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=8XODEslVWQs&feature=related
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- Melodies of Life by AngelBellerose.
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Well I wanted to listen to get more context before I commented by the page nazi wouldn't let me. So I think i like the alliteration. I feel the need to look away. I want to quote a script on hope; but you know them all...
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i loved it
it's really the kind of poetry i look for
thank you for that
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this is really good! i love the flow of it, and it's really good!
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this is very pretty and soothing to read. it's not typically my favorite style of poetry, but i did enjoy reading it, it's like a peaceful lullaby.
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damn/dam lol how do i spell that it wont let me leave this page
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wow this is superb wonderful excellent....it resembles the way i write..and that has gotta be good haha...nice one...bookmarked so i can nick it in the future..haha..as if
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waiting and hoping in dreams we ll want a message to sing in a hearts song well penned hun thank you for your words hugs always Angel♥
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Solid, strong sense of a mantra breathing on the open heart, the waves of possibilty. Ready for the experience. Transformation as enlightenment and enlightenment recognized as fertile when it creates space for love to be shared.
Peace & Light,
Tom B.
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loved the video link too, will look out for his album, thanks
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I will leave my comment before using the link. An unusual and interesting style I haven't seen before. Uplifting as always.
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Absolutely beautiful and a joy to recite aloud! There is a wonderful softness about this poem that you have achieved using the poetic devices of alliteration and epanaphora to complement each other. This is brilliant writing my friend.
Love,
Amera♥
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I love the style you used for this poem it is wonderfully written and obviously love inspired. Beautiful, and the song is amazing as well.
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just breathtaking i for one enjoyed this piece good luck
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Poet
Romance...How I do remember the thrill of it all. Sadly now replaced by a cacophony of colossus contributors to contraband. hang tough poet.
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Love the style you put in this, thoughts seem like that is all there is the wait, want, hope, waking that makes us hold on and yet wonder, You capture as the heart and mind debate. Awesome. Blessings.
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Reads like the hope of love inspired, as you do so often and so beautifully
C
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