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red red lip stick

pink was for demure way back when,

shouting from that roof top

mirror crashing down, 

that's not me any more she yells. 

 

Policeman came to talk did not understand 

 just another man, she said, he said, she said

all to no avail.

 

flying, flying she went flying on her way to dying,

pure laughter and words sang out, you can't hurt me any more.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

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  • Eusebius
    October 27

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    Fine, pithy piece, and mysterious as well! I think I almost understand it and then it escapes me completely... a very fine write it is, indeed!!

  • Starz of Heaven gold member
    October 23

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    This is a really really tough contest this week so many good writes you guys are making this very hard on us thanks for taking the time to enter our contest best wishes always be well.


  • Camille Morin gold member
    October 21

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    Stellar! You know I love drama, and this is packed. So well written. Bravo, Aiyana!

    Love,
    Camille


    • Rheea gold member
      October 21
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      you are the sister my soul never had...


  • Cup-a-Joe
    October 21

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    Nice pic there Sis. You be looking pretty with the hat on.
    This is really good, and yet sad. Words can cut like a knife.
    Best of lucj .

    Joe

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