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Ice

Nice and cold you make my dink,
My chicken and steak you keep cool too,
to my convenience you are the link,
you also help to chill my booze,

a whole Continent is made from you,
allot of  alaska and mountains too,
you are the one ill never hate
you harden lakes so I can skate

some say that your the key to all,
animals freeze , come back and sprawl,
bobsled and hockey, fun sports for sure,
you have a machine that you call yours,

cold but pleasant are feelings from you,
your used for bruises that's black and blue,
in cones you come in different colors,
Ice, yes Ice you are my brother!

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  • You really did an awesome job with this. This piece had a nice smooth feel to it. Thank you so much for entering.


  • Angel-of-Chaos
    October 21
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    You just have a way with words, you make everything sound all good lol. Good write...