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Every hurtfull thing you 've

said to me was just another

bullet to my head....

& every other hurtfull thing

you've said to me,was

one step Closer 2 my lifes

END.

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it's no big deal...

break her heart,

let her down & make her cry.

it's All because you care about her RIGHT???:[

-->me,SAD-emo-GIRL:[

 

has this ever happened2 u? did u ever fell like this? tell me:]

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  • ZachP gold member
    October 21

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    this is, alas, a part of life, dear poet;
    but you must persevere, and rise above
    all of the problems.

    I couldn't face my Father and Friend in Heaven,
    if I was to end my own life;
    which is one of the main reasons that I keep going on,
    even when things are less than perfect.

    Welcome to allpoetry,
    I'll keep an eye out for more of your work.

    Best wishes,
    Zach Estel.