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If I traded it all..(to be continued)

From that lovely smile, to the ringing of your voice, you left your mark in your place, in my heart...

From the elegance of your beauty, to the beating of your wanting heart, you were everything I could of asked for, and so much more...

Never held you in my arms..
Never kissed your lips...
Never have I gazed upon your beauty from closeness,
Or felt that beating of your heart with my hand...
But I have felt your love from afar...

You were mine for however short of time,
And I was all you wanted...

You opened my eyes,
And I saved your life...

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