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Hateres one minus a six pack

stagger and stutter
for the cold has given me a shudder
lagged out and strung about
these waves seem to pout

tacking day upon day
the road almost faded away
when a sleepless night turns a bit grey

we suited up and walked out
with forty blowing twenty
lonesome was the key
and the waves were plenty for thee

crumbles and crashes
waves threw us around
trying to smash us
thou we were thrashless


Author notes

its bout a surf trip me and 4 buddies made up to the outer banks in north carolina. we knew it would be rough when we got there considering we went 2 days before it was forcasted to be 14foot waves. what we didnt expect was the 20 MPH winds at 40 degrees. nonetheless we had a great time and were all looking forward to another trip ...just next time were not riding 5 people deep in a jaguar for 12+ each way

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  • Veronica Leigh
    October 21

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    I love how you always seem to have such interesting and different things to write about. It always makes reading your works very fun and always gives the reader a glimpse into your life. I love that and I wish I was better at that than I am.

    Great job as always. It was a pleasure to read.