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She only dreams in black and white

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Perched on the wings of a lullaby,
free to caress the blue abyss,
pulse flutters in response
to dreams of freedom

While errant thoughts

creep black and white

into somber musings

 

She envisages her tomorrows

Author notes

Haven't written in forever......trying to get the hang of this again!

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  • Sweet Impatience gold member
    October 21

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    what's there to get a hang of? You did an outstanding job here with this poem. I love absolutely love, love the opening line. The imagery is fantastic and this poem to me is thought provoking.

    Good luck
    Kat


  • Reptile Lady gold member
    October 21

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    Awesome hun
    You pulled this perfectly out of the bag, and created art of poetry to perfection
    Sad and deep
    best wishes

    Julie


  • PerfectImperfection
    October 21

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    Nice use of depth and articulation throughout. An intriguing take on the prompt chosen, beauty spun in dimmed glory. Nice write!


  • kiwigirljacks gold member
    October 20

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    I just love the sense of hope in this despite the sombre musings!

    You could never lose your handle on writing, you've too much talent.


  • JinSays gold member
    October 20

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    honey, you'll never lose your magic. this is beautiful.
    Im so glad to see you writing again. just like old times, eh? it's even Kat's contest.
    love to you forever,
    and best wishes always.
    love,
    jin


  • Kathraina gold member
    October 20

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    we used some of the same words!
    Wow, this is absolutely amazing. You've outdone the prompt! I absolutely love your take on that beautiful picture.

    bravo and best of wishes



    ♥ kate

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