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Nothing.

Leaves change colour before my eyes,
dripping sorrow onto me,
my life has become a torn book,
an unhinged door,
an unpainted canvas.
It's all because of you.

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Short, but I can't honestly speak right now.

Have you ever felt this way?

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  • Eternally Fallen
    October 22

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    Idunno what's going on with you, cause we haven't talked in forever, but as far as the poem goes it's sad, short, and to the point. I like it. ^.^


  • chasing rainbows
    October 21
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