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I was homeless once.

I have a straight line on my palm, instead of one heart line and one head line.
(a "simian line")


I don't believe in anything.

A contest entry

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  • an emi
    November 3

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    j'adore ta beurre

    je pense que tout le monde adore ta beurre, ma petite chou.


    • libel -
      November 6
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      ah, oui? moi aussi, j'aime ta beurre!
      c'est le même, notre beurre. et tout le monde aime ca.


  • winterbound. gold member
    October 27

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    song: delicate by damien rice

    two truths and a lie:
    even a parent can hate their child.

    the only such thing as "butterflys in your stomach" is when your on a swing, dangling upside down as you swing and you pull up sharply. that tingle; thats the only known "love".

    a smile is always a lie.


    • libel -
      October 28
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      okay so question; I create one poem from these three truth/lies?
      and thank you!


  • winterbound. gold member
    October 25
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    I need your song and two truths & a lie so i can give everyone their prompt.

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