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Alone

my words
from your lips
that i long to kiss
it was you
that kep me here
i feel so numb
kinda like when your foot falls asleep
prickly and wierd
is how i feel
i catch my breath
only to hold it
I wait for words
i know you will not say
i long for your touch
that has come and gone
I say hey
cause i know you won't
I just want one
instead of some
i can turn it on
and tune it out
i have become
so humble that I can not
live for your love
I long for you
but prefer my own touch
i spend my days
loving myself
cause i know
there is no one else

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  • Naughtygrlred
    January 15
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    I love myself a bit to much


  • Im3
    January 15
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    and why are you alone with all you have to offer...this is a lovely display of what one does when they love themselves


  • everybody hurts
    December 25, 2009
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    my words
    from your lips
    that i long to kiss
    it was you
    that kep me here

    very well written...


  • Vampire
    December 1, 2009
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    oh so erotic,
    I guess nothing in reality can match up to fantasy?

    *bites*
    X Vampire X


  • Love-EroticPoet
    November 29, 2009
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    Smooth write. I like it


  • EvansV
    November 28, 2009
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    very sweet and sad

    wow sweetie i can feel your pain and the loss of a loved one that doesnt realize you are there


  • Rend the Veil gold member
    November 25, 2009
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    beauty in your pen,
    as I felt and understood
    what was held in each line,
    stunning !!

    love and blessings

    Rend


  • ShadoWarrior
    October 22, 2009

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    Long time no read my friend, this is twisted between sexy and sorrow. excellent write, deep dark with a spice of hope. You rock and I love your "VIBE" hehehe.


    • Naughtygrlred
      October 26, 2009
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      well thank you, this is about lost love, masterbation and not really wanting to settle but then again, her heart is so broken and she wants too settle because she doesnt want to be alone, but after everything she has been thru she would rather masterbate, she needs no one, she has no trust for men and always falls for the wrong ones. You know kind of like it is what it is....its good when you have it, and when its gone its gone.

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