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Fallen

  F elt so good to be wanted,
    A lthough I was was falling
      L etters of integrity
        L aughter coursing through my veins
          E xternal pain became too much
            N ever again will I lose myself in depression

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  • Guerrero
    October 22
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    that was amazing! it controdicts its self. its amazign


  • INsOmNiAs-RiOt
    October 21

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    If you'd make this a little longer while still sticking to what you got going, this would be more awesome. It already is but I know you can take it to the next level.

    Great read.

    <3 Sis