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Shattered Reality

Where did the sweet dreams go?
It didn't make any sense to me...
where reality split at the seams,
life lasts longer
with your eyes closed.
And mine where open,
the whole time.

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  • xshatteredxdreamsx
    October 20
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    thats so sad yet beautiful the truth of your feelings makes this a wonderful piece