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The Sun Set

Sun is sinking low
shadows are falling
the day is done

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  • Swan song gold member
    October 24
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    just like that kind of a change of emotions huh? Thak you for sharing

  • A floatingleaf silver member
    October 22
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    A beautiful write...


  • NearBluePoetry
    October 21
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    I love this..... Its short sweet, and beautiful.
    'Nuff said.

  • goalsv
    October 21
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    A beautiful sentiment, short sweet and powerful.


  • Denerica
    October 21
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    Beautiful as we can see our shadow like that sunset be renewed every morning, Excellent haiku. Blessings.


  • catz Moderators member
    October 21
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    Oh, this is nice, Ed I love haiku and this one is very good.
    I wish you the best in the contest

    Dee

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