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Fake

you're not real
you're fake

you dont tell the truth
you lie

you say you know everything
but you really dont

you say it's all about you
it's really not

you say I'm a waste of a life
you're a waste of a man

you're not real
you're fake

and I wont be like her
I wont deal with this forever

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  • EvansV
    October 28
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    very powerful

    wow sweetie this is very strong i hope i can catch you soon so we can chat ttyl sarah your friend evans

  • Bleeding Roses
    October 26
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    :)

    there is only 1 word I can use to discribe this......AWSOME!!!!!


  • Fallen-Thumper gold member
    October 21
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    a really great write, awesome and so much is said, and a lot so true, a really great job!