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Abomination's Child

On the velvet shade of twilight, one Mnemosyne kiss parts the lips of dawn.
At the cusp of Saturn's moon, belly ripens; fore shadows birth of new day;
Child of play wake! Yawn in spawn you be speckled face; a true mid night
Blue lily of the Nile; rest your fragrant head awhile on the breasted-crest of moontide.

In quintessential style flows the golden scent...as falling stars bid farewell
To blackened skies disguising viperous ties to fore stall ancestral lies ~~cries
Tied to the thorns of Christendom's false hoods bearing signets of blood-lust--
Crust of bread fed to meeks weak from symbolic rituals:earth bleeds her wine.

Mine own Beloved's blood fills cup with empty promise...blind heinous crime;
Hind-sighted millennia drunk in thy swill of self-will's revelry:sublime abominations;
Prostrations before idols. Pilferage. Castrated eyes scorched to bondage ~ wed deep:
Sleep to weep in utter appallation; silent castigation, lost navigation;

Blasphemy's abject devastation! Bane of self-deception. Lost insurrection!
                               

Author notes

We struggle to climb up the ladder and return our Soul to its Rightful Heir.

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  • drifting cloud silver member
    November 1

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    Your talented poetic words paint the picture as it is, indeed. We have followed like sheep the distortions of the ego mind for long enough,now. Time to wake up, humankind. Thank you for entering the contest ‘Metaphysical Poems #3’.


  • Andre ben-YEHU
    October 21

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    Cosmic flower...


    A banquet to the nine Muses is served with ambrosial syllables from petals of cosmic flowers on the table of "Abomination's Child".

    In respect and admiration,

    Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU