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Black and white

The colours we see,
the colours we feel
are just a world
between
black and white-
The elegance of
peace is
white
the strength of
individuality is
black
white is the neutrality
where all colours
come and meet
black is the void where none
come to meet,
red comes with
sensuality
yellow hope
fire orange
freshness is green,
coolness blue,
Violet the
harmony and
idigo is responsibility.
All the seven when
together woven born
is white,
all the seven when
missing result
is black
the universe

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  • Blue-Rose Beauty gold member
    October 24

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    Wow! I love how you connected all the colors. Great job, the line, it's all just a colors between black and white is brilliant. I never thought of it that way.

    Thanks for entering and good luck in my contest.

    - Polymerized


  • smitaanand
    October 24

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    Very succinct and very beautifully expressed with simple words but appropriately chosen and with inherent depth and meaning.The poem is really like a spectrum wheel very captivating.All the best in the contest.Take care and continue to share...


  • Draig aine gold member
    October 23
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    oh I like

    wonderful chakra rainbow like it very much

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