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What It Was Once

Can you blame me? Sucked in so hard I couldn't breathe. How do you just get over that?

Three months later I'm still here.
Repelled from what was once my reality,
Watching my life play from the outside.

Three months later I don't want anyone else.
I press my ear against the door,
Recalling all the things you said as you repeat them to her.

Three months later I'm invisible.
Not even a second glance,
I'm less than a memory to you.

She'll never fit your arms the way I did. I'll swallow all of the dreams I had for us and you'll never know them.

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  • Faerie.Princess
    November 12

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    this is beautiful, and its definatly something i can relate to. its something i think many girls could. great poem
    Thankyou for entering, always keep writing
    xoxo


  • glenn shannon silver member
    October 22
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    sadly beautiful you put it in such a moving way id say his loss but gee i felt it


  • Roseamongweeds
    October 20

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    It's sad when you believed in everything someone said, only to have your visions cracked in front of your eyes, which leaves you hoping for solid ground.