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a pair of red shoes...

she holds the shoes tight like shown,
whispers, "there's no place like home."

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  • condor gold member
    October 24
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    Wow1 So simple and straight forward and she walks away with the silver. Yaah!


  • daffodilblossom
    October 21
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    bravo

    felt easily


  • UnbreakableSoul gold member
    October 20
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    Congratulations, Symphony, was a very good write and I thank you!


    • Symphony
      October 21
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      UnbreakableSoul,

      thank YOU for the inspiration [and the challenge] to write and also for the trophy ;-)


  • awannabepoet
    October 20
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    Congrats on the fine silver...

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