Radiant heat churns in the pit of her core,
escalating to abundant waves washing over
fiery flesh as the discovery of his misdeed
boils in the depths of her reeling conscience.
The very sight of his smug countenance
sends her mind into a tumultuous frenzy
of ravenous maniacal ponderings in a
deep longing to rain down due punishment.
Her every subtle fantasy is quickly consumed –
staring at his insincere grin, every vibrant vision
comes to life in the quagmire of her rotting mind.
She yearns to feel his skull split beneath the
downward force of a blunted, rusty cleaver.
Only because she knows it would hurt more;
taking longer than a bright, new razor edge.
A thick lead pipe would be insanely divine for
caving his head in with a scarlet spray of
blood and brains to paint her satisfied smile.
Or, she could carve his serpent tongue from his
twisted, lying mouth with a simple table knife.
She will bear down – merciless – she knows
as each scene returns a more gruesome fate.
To scoop out each soft, juicy eyeball with a
swift shove of her lunging thumbs, or to
lop off each of his fingers, one by grubby one,
would ring in heights of intense jubilation.
But none so joyous as the thought of a
grimy, crusted meat grinder castration.
Her riotous fury rages as she forces a smile
through the clouded haze she is concealed within.
He chortles on, oblivious to his concocted doom,
she will savor every second as his life slowly fades.
The satisfaction will quell her demons inside,
yet this vengeance will be her own demise.
Author notes
Prompt: 7 Deadly SIns... WRATH
Pic Found here: http://aiobhan.deviantart.com/art/Wrath-78032104
BG Made from pic found here: http://blackeri.deviantart.com/art/The-Seven-Deadly-Sins-WRATH-45063193
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- Seven Deadly Sins (Group contest for Manically Macabre Group only) by twelfthknight.
1000 points, ended October 23, 12 entries
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MUAHAHAHAHAHA!!!
Comments
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Woot, you go!!!
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Well! Don’t beat around the bush. Tell us how you REALLY feel. This is great. It’s revolting but it’s great. I would feel safer about my own entry if you had not entered this. Good luck in the contest.
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Wow, well thanks for the wonderful comment
I'll bet yours is just fantastic! ny my way to read it now!
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Yeah....
..... vindictive yes so sweet are the horrific images! My favorite part as you would probably guess:
"A thick lead pipe would be insanely divine for
caving his head in with a scarlet spray of
blood and brains to paint her satisfied smile."
Gory Glory as the cranial matter expells
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wow
this is sick and twisted...and lets be fair...a little SCARY...
imagery was amazing though gave me chills...haha
I tink once or twice I crossed my legs and hoped for the best for the victim in this poem....but i also like the fact that you give it a sense of two way victims in this poem....the one doing the torture will also suffer in the end.....
a great poem you have penned......dark and nasty
well done for the poem and the gold you got for it..
loved this bit....AAAARRRGGGHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH
To scoop out each soft, juicy eyeball with a
swift shove of her lunging thumbs, or to
lop off each of his fingers, one by grubby one,
would ring in heights of intense jubilation.
But none so joyous as the thought of a
grimy, crusted meat grinder castration.
AAAAARRRGGGGHHHHHHHHHH yep im still screaming...
Jayde
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It's no wonder you wanted to start this group, wrath, piffle, this is a case of a woman who has seriously been scorned. The cheat, the wayward wandering hellhound, the impudent p**** chasing filanderer. Please remind me to stay on your good side. LOL. CA this isdemonic in origin and gives rise to what do women really think when they have caught their other half in the thrall of the latest tail to come their way. Head caving, eye gouging, lopping off of fingers and the all important castration with something rusty and dull. Makes the guys want to make a premanent home from whence they came, somewhere deep inside where they can't be got. Devious, deliscious, dastardly and downright scary if you are him. Oblivious might be his best option, never know what happened. hehehe
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MUAHAHAHAHA!!! Yep... I was thinking, "Now what would I do if my man cheated on me?" as I wrote this
I am a vengeful person... my deadly sin that will be my undoing is most definately wrath 
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Sins of life
Again beautiful, dark and wonderful... this says it all.
To scoop out each soft, juicy eyeball with a
swift shove of her lunging thumbs, or to
lop off each of his fingers, one by grubby one,
would ring in heights of intense jubilation.
But none so joyous as the thought of a
grimy, crusted meat grinder castration.
your friend PKO
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A truly awesome piece of writing
Oh what delicious visions of torture...hehehe...these lines are my favs....
But none so joyous as the thought of a
grimy, crusted meat grinder castration.
LOL...great minds (women's) think alike...Good Luck!!!
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OOO! OOO! YES! YESSSSSSSSSSSSS! IL OVE IT SO MUCH! ITS OMFG! AND THE PICTURES! AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!! I LURVE THISSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSS!!! I do. =3
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Well I'm glad you like it so much
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excellent
outstanding imagery
impressive write you have penned
love these lines...
But none so joyous as the thought of a
Grimy, crusted meat grinder castration.
well done poetess
good luck to you in the contest
thanks for the share
Darky
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Well I know who wrote this dark beauty! lol I love it! all of it! as usual it is overflowing with darkness with amazing imagery. I enjoyed reading how this woman was so comsumed with wrath that it was like a unstopable need for her to kill him! I loved the bit about her wanting to castrate him! I even crossed my legs at that part! which is odd lol
Thanks for entering and good luck
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Awww shucks you guessed it was me lol. I'm glad you guys liked it I had fun writing this poem
I think Wrath is the most fun deadly sin lol
And I might have to just make my own series of deadly sin poems now, cause this one's got me inspired
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I REALLY like this poem! The imagery is fantastic, I liked the way you described each method of killing this man. Amazingly dark, I just love it and the background is fab!
Thanks for entering the contest and good luck
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Glad you likey
The background was the pic I was looking for too lol
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