Haunted once more from my
fading life, withered with sorrow
and desperation.
Burned alive, I am dust, now
your lives can grow.
All this rage within', bleeds my
emotions. Alone inside this dark
dream, death come kiss me.
Tired of trying to stay strong
for a tomorrow that's not mine.
May my angels be killed,
and I suffer for my failures.
God damn I wish I had words,
for I would break this shell and
say sorry. But I keep thinking,
dying is the only way to show
I'm truly sorry.
This isn't a wanting of forgiveness,
this is my cure for your pain.
Now rest, and I'll drift in misery
to ressurect the happiness I've numbed
in your hearts.
Author notes
"The feeling of fire and the emotion of being haunted, speak for my failures"
Sincerly,
D.Wolf
A contest entry
- I Know This Is Wrong But Still Worth Dying For by Faerie.Princess.
560 points, ended November 12, 9 entries
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this is beautiful, and one im sure many people could relate to, for everyone fails at one point in there life..
great write
Thank you for entering. always keep writing
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Great job ur much better writer then me i wish ur poetry was in books that i could buy and have u sign
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this is great.. can relate to it a lot.
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Amazingly written. True feelings of a broken heart. I hope you find someone who is willing to help you mend it. I can understand this word for word completely. I just hope you know, somewhere out there, there are people who love you, and would be devastated if you where to die. Sorry my grammar sucks.
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amazing write...this is how i feel...cuz i hate mii mistakes nd mii emotions and i feel worthless like if i died tht no 1 would miss me..
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amazing write broke my heart
truly beautiful
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