Smile for the camera
in this tiny booth
giggle with a wiggle
hide that lost tooth
Memories to hold on to
nothing will be held back
all will show forever
peek in-between the crack
Curtain pulled and ready
smile if you can
happy days with friends
always with a plan
A strip of photos to remember
place in a hidden box
bring out to bring a smile
sly as a fox...
Please tell me what you think
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I love this. I haven't been in a photo booth in a long time, and this takes me places I've never been.
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I like this almost playful piece on photobooth, it has a light heartedness to it that works well with the rhyme scheme
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Nicely done, its a very cute reflection what sounds like a wonderful day shared with childhood friends. I can hear the laughter and see the smiles with every line.
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Well done I see the picture with your every word , the fun days spent at the mail pay a dollar for a few years worth of laughter. this brought back some good memories for me well done poet
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Ducking her head to hide a lost tooth, possibly after the suggestion from a friend that she smile, is a good take on this photo - I always wonder about people who don't like to show their teeth in photos or are shy about it, which could be what's going on here. Cute rhyme, thank you for your nostalgic entry into the photo booth.
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