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Night Moves

The harp of my mother
so the old story goes;
cries out in the night
forsaken in England
where no shamrock grows.

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  • AngelBellerose gold member
    November 11
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    heartfelt for the story is told Love the way you penned this awesome and thank you for sharing well said hugs Angel♥


  • Mareann52
    November 5
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    Short but sweet

    it's not how long the poem, but the content that counts. Thanks for sharing, Mareann


  • Jarret F
    November 1
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    Good

    "forsaken in England where no shamrock grows." I like the symbolism here a lot. Good job.


  • albymyheart gold member
    October 23
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    The harp of my mother cries in my nights. Lovely poem...Alb y

  • abu nuwas
    October 21
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    Ronnica

    That's really touching! So brief, so nostalgic.

    Really good.

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