With soft silence the night comes.
Dreading with fear, I tremble.
Lost in a paradox, in my head,
haunting my thoughts.
In loneliness I walk into the dark,
must be strong, all around evil lurks.
A shadow within' a shadow, I mourn
of the oncoming madness.
All my cries for a savior unanswered,
tease my fallen faith. How much longer
can I bear this? Deep down all this pain
stirs into murderous desires.
Though is this bravery or am I going
insane. Your face takes my body
and I die, and you begin your steal, to
ease your taunting fantasies.
Trapped, I grip the edge of my
sanity and yearn to survive against your
rift, you enjoy bringing onto me.
Into a dream I'll rest,
dreamt the victory of your defeat.
Think I can feel your voice fading,
or is this my only escape while you
do this to me.
Author notes
"The dream, is all I have, and may it never die"
Sincerely,
D.Wolf
A contest entry
- Darkness Within by ley527.
600 points, ended November 11, 12 entries
Gold trophy winner
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so much emotion in this poem. you are a great poet! good luck in this contest.
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i loved it idk what that ley527 dude was talking about it was great enjoyed reading
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Hmmm, I'm not sure how feel about this one. It's not badly written, it just didn't catch my attention. Thank you for entering it none the less
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