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Unmystified

                                    Darkness as I walk, Darkness as I walk,
                                          for I am a black osidian horse
                                  which means nothing in this world can stop
                                      me from who I want to be.
                                  For I am the one who will make my life
                                  right, and just to let you know my heart
                                                    is UNBROKEN

                                  Darkness take me in, Darkness sick me out
                                for I am stronger than you, and you cannot consume
                                        me.
                                  Because I get to choose, who I want to be, for I am
                                          the claw Tiger! Yoww!

                                  As I say Darkness cannot prevail, and light
                                Light will take me in, for I am the angel of both
                                light and Dark. I can face either or, and I decide
                                to choose light for I am  UnMystified


                                 

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  • JinSays gold member
    October 28
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    I really love how you started this poem. I wasnt so sure about the capitalization of the word mystified at the end. I have read it several times though, and can guesstimate it's probably that way for emphasis. I think you offered alot here, imagery was fresh and effective, thank you so much for taking the time to enter, and I wish you all the best.
    Love,
    jin