I got a 7 by 7 paper sun glued to my boxed world
with the mirage that echos in my head "it can't get colder, there's nothing darker"
but there always is, for every time you think its over..
I trace every sun drop kiss with bleeding fingertips
gently ever so gently each glance shattering ocean waves colliding with my hearts fire ablaze..
but this time...
this time..i don't breathe life back into your glass eyes softly whispering souls
for this time ... you took mine
i walked the streets barefoot in search of rain
scortching thorns i danced upon to hear you call my name..
fate was what killed me..
why did you have to smile.... my beloved
didn't you see the pain , fanaa i became
beating heart beats, cried slowly died but you never stopped the train..
you never made it rain..
endless books i've written each page carrying your name
not once has anyone written a line for the girl you'll forget just the same
A contest entry
- PREWRITES!! Emotion please!! by Graciee.
550 points, ended November 24, 208 entries
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i havnt written in a long time.. i know its not good.. just honestly tell me what u think..or if i should fix something..
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a stunning write penned in pain i felt every word you portrayed.. you made the words come alive in every breath a painful sigh.. well penned always hugs Angel♥
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thank you... sigh..love doesnt last...and sometimes u can give ur life for someone but they still wont love u like u love them..if that makes sense...
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Fanaa yes it does sometimes no matter what you do.. they still will never give their heart to you.. I say their loss.. for you are the fairer of them all Hugs♥♥
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thank you...that is ever so kind of u to say...
yet i think what hurts the most isnt that they dont love u but rather that you couldnt save them...
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