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truth and lies

Tell me u hate me
And that u want me gone forever
I will understand

Tell me im not good enough
And I will know it’s the truth

Tell me you don’t like me
That you really want me dead
And it is the truth I know

But instead you lie
And say that its the truth

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  • k.a.s.s.i.e
    October 22
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    yep, been there

    still there

    good write

    kass


  • Blood N Tears
    October 21

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    Dan,
    sweetie, whats wrong? Something's bothering you badly, obviously. Sorry we can't talk like we did last semester (stupid school schedules) but you can still tell me whats wrong. We've been through so much together, how could we not? Anyway, please let me know whats going on. Please.

    Love you much,
    Lillie

  • keep it flowing


  • Jazzlyn
    October 20
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    ... i hope you know this is not true on my part Dan


  • MySonTrippEchoes
    October 20

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    Golly gee dan if there something wrong you can chat back it with me i know we dont know each other very well but still im a good listener and if you dont want to chat its okay with me im not going to go around and trying to open your lock doors and im pretty sure dan that not everybody feels that way about you and if they do then i will send fairies to their homes and they will fuck them in the ear much love jackie


  • MaddCuppyCake
    October 20

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    its not true Dan
    i want u around, living & breathing
    i could never hate u. i'll always want u around, & ur good for anyone that knows u. we all care about u & want u w us

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