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live your life

if i must go , it is because you have never understood how to let me stay
if i must go , it is because i have loved you more than what you think love could be
and i darling , would just leave you with your clever thoughts of depth and of life
the life that you wanted all your life to live... and i will not reclaim to be a priority
in it , i would cut the pain , and drink one more time the fell poison of my deep love
not appreciated by you ,  not seen , not valued..
in life you will smell women's perfum and touch their dark , brown or blond hair , and maybe say one millions i love you , and you would like a bird , see thounsands of things and fly free.. enjoy your freedom.
if i must go , it is because i am so mature , and you're still a child immature
if i must go , it is because i tried to explain more than a time , and you know i love you ,then what to explain , it is all clear to the mind , but you just don't mind ..
you're too selfish to regerd what i feel , you want to live , live your life , and i would live my life , both in a separated way ..
but i know one day , the bird would miss his nest and fly back.. but my fear , the nest is lost , and the tree is cut , and nothing is left but a souvenir..
so live your life

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  • sgking123
    November 16
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    gaud

    this was self dialogung so intense and clear that it had me intoning it...this is good soliloquy that you ahve there....love dits o much......please keep up the good work


  • Ahkam silver member
    November 12
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    Excellent

    Dear Nouha, this is a great piece of thought but the first line is Excellent, so simple and straight. Thanks for sharing such a beautiful thought.


  • camus gold member
    October 21

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    Oh my dear Nouha, how hurt you must be to write this publicly. I feel so much love for you - you are such a special lady. What a deep loss he risks in not being with you while your love for him throbs within your broken heart. You are priceless and unique - he is "fortune's fool" ( From Shakespeare's Romeo & Juliet ) and will bitterly regret his immaturity when the songbird has winged its way to another tree. Tony xx


    • lake of dremas
      October 22
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      miss you

    • lake of dremas
      October 22

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      thanks my dear , your words are so sweet that i felt wonderful after reading them.
      i am lucky to have you by my side ,and no words describe the feeling of having you with me.

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