When I see you
You remind me how much I missed you
When I miss you
I can't wait to see you
When I hear you
You make me know you are there
When I think about waiting for you
You made me already decide
When I think you are mad at me
You say you are not but I'm still worried
When you say please
You don't want to know
When I argue with you
I really hate it
When you hold me
I want you to never let go
When you kiss me
I don't want to stop
When you say I love you
I want to see it millions of times over
When we are together
I don't ever want to leave you
Please give me your honest opinion.
Comments
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It's really a very sweet poem. It's honest and straightforward. Some poets dance around the truth and their thoughts, but you don't. This poem is real, unembellished thought. Nice work!!
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beautiful
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