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Final resting place....

This is it...
This is me...

Deserted,
unwanted by HIM,
un-needed by them....

Well, it seems the tables have turned...

Sure, they think I'm pretty enough to walk past in the street,
to "check me out",
to tell me i'm fit...

BUT I DON'T WANT THEM!

-sigh-

I want you...

I miss you so much, you'd never believe...

I've screwed up in my long time here,
and i've cried over a couple of thousand times...

Will this be the final resting place?
By myself...?

But...I want to be with you...
in your arms,
you whispering my name...

Why can't that be my final resting place....?

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  • k.a.s.s.i.e
    October 22

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    thought provoking, emotional, and it scares me that this may be me again as before.... it's a great write, but i'm sorry you feel this way....

    "But...I want to be with you...
    in your arms,
    you whispering my name...

    Why can't that be my final resting place....?"

    favorite lines i hated feeling this way, and i hope you overcome it soon

    kass


  • Awe this is so heartfelt and sad. I am sure that person will realize they miss you too. Maybe you'll be in their arms again once more. It just takes time. Or maybe you will find someone else better along the way ^^ I love this poem. You expressed yourself very well


  • hyper thing
    October 20
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    dont worry ur final resting place will not come soon

    u know if u ever wanted anyone u can come to me