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Spring Fling

As I sit and ponder
On this marvelous moon lit night
The memorizes of the past
Start to come to mind

Do you remember when we first met?
I doubt that you do
But I can’t seem to forget that wonderful day.
It was the first day of spring
And it was raining terribly hard
You were just there under a tree
Trying to get away from the downpour.
From the moment I saw you
I felt something deep within my heart
I felt that my life was going to change for the better
But I asked myself
Is this going to last?

On that day
You captured my heart
With just a glance
Those beautiful green eyes
They are the most wonderful
I have seen and most likely
Will ever see

Do you remember what happened after that?
I doubt that you do
We started to met everyday at that tree
All the laughs we laughed
And all the fun things we did
It seemed like this happiness
Was never going to fade.
It seemed like every day we were falling
In love with each other but
As it is said “love is filled with pain”

As the spring passed and summer was now upon us
Things started to change between us
We seemed to be growing apart
But I never expected to find out what I did
You were cheating on me from the start

You were married
And you were just using me
As a spring fling
While your husband was away…..

I will never love again
For this pain is just too great
I say
“Why love again if all that love brings me is more pain”

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tell me what you think.....personally i hate it

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  • Midnight Breeze
    November 14
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    This is truly an amazing piece!!!! You express yourself well!!! It is quite sad though, Thank-you for entering!!!


  • Kyuutan-megumi
    November 9
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    Ohh it is so sad! But a good story! I am so glad that you are writing again! It is amazing!

  • paramore083194
    October 24

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    awesome

    wow! dont know what to say! that was amazing! keep up with your poems!


  • sweetheart117
    October 24
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    i love all your poems rememeber that


  • pepping wolf
    October 22

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    sweet very sweet

    hey whats up is this poem your latest cause i thougbht tghat u said that u were not going to wrote any more but it has a lot of fealing to it so yeah it is really beatiful and very sweet also don't hate your poems they mean a lot to e. xoxoxoxox

  • Very Beautiful

    Hello, Your poem is very nice.. it's meaning is deep, I love it


  • spiritual wolf
    October 21

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    i dont hate it. it tells a tale of true happiness that turns to darkness bc of a simple lie. im so sorry if this ever happened on you cuz i know what thats like. i love the easiness in this write


    • Kira65
      October 21
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      well i still hate it...it is no where near good enough for where i want it to be.....
      but for a person with no kind of talent i think i did ok


  • Emo Kris
    October 20
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    you hate all your poems...i still wonder when you are going to see how good you are...


    • Kira65
      October 20
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      when the world no longer wages wars is when i will see how good others think i am....
      and that is a never

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