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Its a small, small world

It's a world of pain, full of blood and spears
It's a world of hopes, crushed by blinding tears
There's so much that we share
That It's time we're aware
It's a small world after all

Its a small world after all
We all rise up to take the fall
End the hatred, break the wall
It's a small world after all

If we all stopped crying and tasting the gun
We could issue friendship to everyone.
Though the mountains divide
And the oceans are wide
It's a small small world

Its a small world after all
We all rise up to take the fall
End the hatred, break the wall
It's a small world after all

It's a world of pain, full of blood and spears
It's a world of hopes, crushed by blinding tears
There's so much that we share
That It's time we're aware
It's a small world after all

If you were a sock puppet, what color would your goggly eyes be?? Oh and revisions too please?

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  • Br0kEn WiNgS
    October 26

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    wow love the rhyme, this flowed beautifully. also enjoyed the repetition, made it feel complete. and sock puppets? uh im a bit lost... lol.


    • Minstrel-Morose
      October 27
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      Haha thank you very much! No revisions? and the sock puppets arent supposed to make sense really...