Falling, falling, never stop
Falling feeling, constant drop
Feel the falling feeling flow
Falling faster as you go
Could one care to contemplate
Calmly coolly calculate
Cosmic crux continuous
Causing confusion to us
Smoothly sailing splendidly
Scratching surfaces we see
Soulful sweeping sensual
Spireward spins eventual
Would one while a wish away
Wanton in a woeful way
Wondering at what went wrong
Wistfully was sung the song
Author notes
Think I'm pretty much finished with it now. Seems to have turned out decently enough.
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I espaecially like the start of the poem.You perfected the art of falling.the reader was falling with you.Well done, Ros
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This really good so far. I'm lookin foward to the rest. Keep up the good work.
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Well I definitely felt like I was falling. I loved how you used the words that start with F in the first stanza and C in the second stanza, I've always found that to be so brilliant. I think you've done a great job on this so far. How fun.
Gee my vocabulary would need a lot of brushing up to be able to even attempt to write in the form of poetry. My hat is off to you as you continue to grow and expand in your artistic gift to write poetry with others and myself.
was so nice to hear from you and I certainly hope all is well.
Wishing You Many Blessings,
Much Love Always,
Kelle Marie
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nice
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Well captured feeling of falling, the wonderment of why, the confusion that stirs, nice start, I am sure your finish will be great. Well done. Blessings.
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