Thoughts of you my delicious dream
Are handcrafted chocolates
Displayed within a silken heart
Strawberry syrup..
A sticky coated secret.
Your name...sweet upon my lips.
Orange sensation..gooey on my eager tongue
The sudden rush..the burst of exhilaration
Soaring sunshine each time we speak
The truffle..slightly exotic
A tinge of the forbidden
A tingling tale of temptation
And the prized walnut whirl
The deep filled cavity..dripping with delights
The thrill of the thrusting hard centre
A contest entry
- Romantic Words..Winner takes Gold and me for Collab partner...Ladies Only by SteveandSon.
500 points, ended October 20, 17 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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This poem is sweet. No pun intended. :-p
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wow
sweet,suagry and delicious write on how he heart should feel and look like of a dearest one...chcolates...hmmm makes one hink harder and harder. Disarming and adorable poetry. Visit me and see if you can comment me. -
Very cute. This makes the heart beat and the tooth ache at the same time.
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This is so full of nice imagery. It really gets you going with your mind thinking of all the ways you can take this. Very clever and sweet write. Thank you for allowing me to read your nice poem.
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well i hit on this one t and what can i say, lol, very pleasantly supprised!! lol, mmmmmm, each line tantilizing my taste buds and also my thoughts, very tasty indeed my dear and so very utterly suggesstive! i enjoyed unravelling and savouring each and every one of those tasty little treats! lol, you have done yourself justice, x x
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''Life is like a box of chocolates, you never know what you're going to get...''. Well I'm sure you know the rest. Now love, love Is Like A Box Of Chocolates too, and once again you've written an amazing piece, one I'm sure to make your partner proud to have you by his side. Take care and thanks for sharing Theresa.
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I'm not quite certain if I need to go and hit up the Halloween candy or if I need to smoke a cigarette. Whew!! Was it good for you?
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oh my but isn't this a treat - a box of innocent and suggestive chocolates shared.
so entertaining.
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hi rick so glad ya liked this one
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i love the way you penned your heart and a smile for the sticky face holds like a box of chocolates the essence of the story holds Hugs always Angel♥
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thankyou...lol...this was such a tongue in cheek write hahah glad ya liked it
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Loved it honey put a smile on my face and a craving in my tummy
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gimme some chocolate,what a expressive piece
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lol..glad ya liked this it was a lil tongue in cheek hahaha..what flavour you want?
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Well this is rich in cocolate metaphores all right...next time you open a box give me a shout, and we'll kick off with the walnut whirls yeah!!!
Phew girl...talk about NUTS!!!
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Like a box of chocolates, you wrote very sensual like i like lol. Keep on penning. Thank you for entering and good luck in the contest. You did some good metaphors here.
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Theresa
Is it just me? Or do I detect something more than chocolates? Where does sensual end and 'adult' begin? Maybe at last I know why women like chockies. Which reminds me, I have some Aero knocking about.....
Very creative, and not single error!
Sounds as though life is on the up!
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LOL..TWAS SUCH A TONGUE IN CHEEK WRITE..GLAD YOU APPROVE LOL
HUGS
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Theresa
The correct place for a tongue!
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but you never know what your going to get until you sink your teeth in deep. sometimes you just have to choke it down and move on to the next one. you certainly can't let that last one keep you from the next. sweet photo by the way.
Smiles
Rick
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LOL...OH RIC THIS WAS SO VERY TONGUE IN CHEEK...GLAD IT MADE U SMILE...THE LIL PRINCESS IN THE PIC IS VICTORIA MY ELEVEN YEAR OLD...I LOVE HER TO BITS..SHE IS MY LITTLE SHADOW LOL
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