Trick or treat, trick or treat,
give me something good to eat.
Hands or feet, blood to drink,
Tis the night we hunt and feast.
Human bones and human flesh.
Only taste good when the kill is fresh.
Halloween no one sleeps.
All you hear is people's screams.
The children feed, and watch you bleed.
They need no air to even breathe.
Evil breeds and evil seeds.
Human sacrifice is what they need.
Darkened sky,in this endless night.
No one will ever hear you cry.
No remorse and no mercy in their eyes.
They laugh and play after they watch you die.
Laughter and fun, there is no sun.
There is no use to try and run.
No priest nor nun can stop their fun.
No use will it be to use a gun.
So trick or treat, trick or treat,
give me something good to eat.
Hands or feet, blood to drink.
Tis the night we hunt and feast.
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- Give Me Rhyme or Give Me Death 5 by NickRhyme.
700 points, ended October 30, 10 entries
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Deliciously WICKED!
perhaps that is why I always trick or treat with a turtle neck on;
gobs of garlic stuffed in my pockets...and ....a flask of holy water
you ...know..just in case....
I'm deprived of my Reese Peanut butter cups..
(maybe)
lovely, flow and rhyme in your poem.
What a fabulous Halloween song this would be!
(Marilyn Manson of course)
WAY TO WRITE!
ears2hearyou/Kathleen
GLUTTON FOR PUNISHMENT SALUTE!
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WOW...amazingly awesome good write i myself think ryme is the way to write but experimenting is good I love this part:"So trick or treat, trick or treat,
give me something good to eat.
Hands or feet, blood to drink.
Tis the night we hunt and feast."
very well written and done...keep it up -
HaHAAA! I liked this one. Bloody, gorey, violent halloween fun. Over all a great, bloody write. Thanks for having me read this man.
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very good!
I really liked this
Good job!
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