To seek love is to seek what can't be sought,
But to find love,
Ahh! That is the greatest gift that god Hath wrought.
Author notes
Re-write of "God's Greatest Gift" I feel as though this poem sounds better as though its being given as advice, so for those of you who have read the earlier piece, note the addition of the "ahh" and how it seems almost reflective or reminiscent as though the older man is thinking back on his own past loves.
A contest entry
- Five Lines of Whatever #3 by Heavenly Angel.
550 points, ended November 2, 25 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
I appreciate all criticisms. Please keep them constructive though.
Comments
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Very nice
I think this is a fine piece and I thank you for sharing
All the best to you!!!
~Heavenly~
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