Every bit of me is less
So much less when your not near
Every tear is lonely
Every voice is mute
Without you
I am empty
Like a zombie
I only eat
To live
Even though I can not taste no more
My mind so empty
It's as if my life is on pause
Each moment I wait
Doubt only torments me
But I said I'd give my life
Just for one more moment
In your spotlight
You cannot save me
Only I can save myself
In this,I finally let go
Puzzle of my life
I am ready
For what is to come
I do not know....
Comments
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this is so sad.
but it's a really good piece. once again, you have me jealous of your talent. do you still write music? if so, i think that this would make for a good song
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This is a great write! There was one line that seems somewhat problematic, "Even though I can not taste no more", because it has a double negative. Maybe you could try, though I cannot taste anymore? Anyways, I loved this! Good job!
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Wow
I understood every word of that and i fell what you mean if that makes sense....
My favorite part is:
Each moment i wait
Doubt only torments me
But I said I'd give my life
Just for one more moment
In your spotlight
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