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A New Life

The wind tears me to shreds.
Breaking down my core...
Making me numb.
Determined to disappear.

One thought in my mind.
The last words you said to me.
"There's the door...Get out...
And don't come back."

So into the night.
Into the wind.
I lay down hopes,
I lay down feeling.

Not caring where I go,
Just caring about getting away.
Not caring about warmth,
Just needing to be free.

One inch at a time,
I find myself...
One step at a time,
I walk toward a new life.

A life without you.

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  • emma-lou
    October 23

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    love it dude!! totally agree with all of it. so i have this way good poem but i forgot where i put it last night so when i find it you need to read it!!