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Swine Flu

Don't come near me
You've got that piggy flu
Blown out of the water
It's already killed a few

It's a real killer
That nasty swine flu
Don't come no closer
You've got the swine flu

You caught the swine flu
Been coughing for days
It's gonna kill you
If you have AIDS (or cancer)

It's a monster
That fucking swine flu
It's alive!
That nasty swine flu

Stay away from Hispanics
They spread it first
Media creates panic
Ratings are the only cure

Push you in a corner
You've got the swine flu
Don't come any further
You've got that piggy flu
It will kill us all
It will I tell no lies
So stay away from me
I don't wanna die
You've got the swine flu
Don't want the swine flu
You've got that swine flu
That nasty swine flu

You've got the swine flu!
You've got the swine flu!
You've got the swine flu!
So die!

Author notes

If you've noticed, the only ones really dieing from swine flu other than the few unfortunate infants and very young children, the only ones dieing from this "Swine Flu" are people who already have pre-existing conditions that effect the immune system such as HIV/AIDS or cancer. The media has blown this whole thing out of proportion and it is getting completely ridiculous.

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  • Fallen-Thumper
    October 23

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    this is so true and yeah ppl in my skl (im in the UK) are in quarintine from 'swine flu' theyve got like one of the symptoms, its pathetic and it was blown way out of proportion.
    i love your poems, they are awesome and really great, again i love this piece and its a brilliant write. Fantastic!
    -penguin-


  • Inspired By Till
    October 21

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    Hell yeah! I couldn't agree with you more man--the media usually blows shit up but with this, it's 1000 times worse than anything I've ever seen,maybe with the exception of Michael Jackson dying, but still, it's so overdone. It's sickening. Kick ass write man--love the extra emotion you put into the write. Really enjoyed reading it

  • This was an awesome poem
    So true, couldnt help but smile at it
    Great write


  • Syko Path
    October 20
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    so true!


  • C.I.M.A Punk
    October 20

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    In Holland, there were only 2 deaths but they were already ill.
    It's nothing more than a stronger flu.

    Anyway, there is a great punk flow and energy present in this poem.

    Well done!


  • Blood N Tears
    October 20

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    This is so true. I mean no offense, but most of the people that have died are from Mexico, and its because they didn't have health care. In the US its killed very few people, but everyone's acting like its some big problem. I mean, the seasonal flu itself kills more people each year alone than the swine flu will altogether. Great job! I'm glad someone agrees with me.

    Lillie

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