I want to touch the turquoise sky,
and paint the golden leaves.
I want to see the Love you hide;
inside your heart's sewn sleeves.
A contest entry
- Five Lines of Whatever #3 by Heavenly Angel.
550 points, ended November 2, 25 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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You sum it all up perfectly
and so concisely. A lovely thought - and execution. well done.
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This is beautiful and very expressive.
You have spoken volumes within the
limited lines.Good luck in the contest.
~JeannieD Hunter
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Thank you so much. I really liked your poem too. It's so true.
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A wonderful sharing of five lines
I think this is absolutely beautiful!
Thank you so much for sharing and good luck to you!!! -
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Thank you.
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