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[ if the autumn breeze ]

if the autumn breeze
that sighs through the bare trees
brings your love to me
the warmth in my heart evokes
the beauty and charm of spring


Author notes

This is a tanka, I hope.
Since it is now autumn, I think the poem is appropriate.

A contest entry

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  • Draig aine gold member
    October 20
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    ah lee thank you for the lovely tanka


    • Lee Tai Wah
      October 20
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      Hi Drag aine,
      Thank you for the contest and happy anniversary.