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Brightening up her life




Settling for a splash of color in a world gone gray, red makes her day.

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55 letters exactly.

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  • Beautiful-N-Broken silver member
    October 31

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    Oh wow. This is powerful although it's one sentence. You did great with this. I love it and the background is so perfect. That really takes talent! Great job on this!


  • Rend the Veil gold member
    October 25
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    Loved the words Cathy!!
    well penned sss
    love and blessings

    Rend


  • ZachP silver member
    October 21

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    ah, Cathy.

    For fifty five letters,
    you've sure penned each one
    with simple, sweet brilliance.

    This made me smile,
    and brightened up my day.
    thank you for sharing,
    and best wishes.

    Zach Estel.


  • Poetic-Theorem silver member
    October 20

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    OH...
    Amazing take on the prompt
    I peeked at the prompt and was stunned
    My, you wrapped up so much in 55 letters
    Bravo
    Wish you the very best
    Much love my friend
    David


  • Insane killer Klown
    October 20
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    VERY FULLFILL FOR SUCH BINDING RULES


  • Reptile Lady gold member
    October 20

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    I love this sis
    I can see the bright side of her day with the vibrant red to add
    class and style..
    and indeed brightens any dullness..
    best wishes to you

    Julie


  • awannabepoet
    October 20

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    Oh how sweet this is for the colors do seem to contrast don't they, red being what it is only can only imagine the kind of day she will live.

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