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Six -oh-Eight

Six-oh-eight
She stared at the clock
Six-oh-eight
Where was he?
He always arrived at six-oh-eight
Not tonight
No phone call
No text message
No email
No car car in the driveway
Six -oh-eight
No him
Maybe he was dead in a ditch
Maybe he was in an accident
Maybe he was in a hold up at the quick mart
Or maybe he didn't know it was six-oh-eight
She stared at the clock
Six ten
A slamming door got her attention
It was him
But it was no longer six-oh-eight
It wasn't six-oh-eight
It was six ten
It was no longer six-oh-eight
She sighed deeply

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  • rite gold member
    January 15
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    Your writes are well crafted, but disturbing in nature. Should that be cause to worry?


    • wickedangel25
      January 16
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      I don't think there should be reason to worry.I just write whatever comes to mind.Sometimes it reflects me,other times not.I appericate you taking time to read my work.Thank you.