It happens so suddenly when
your close friend/family
betrays you and your suppose
to take it in stride.
Well perhaps that isn't the case
when someone goes insane
due to the fact he/she was betrayed
becareful when they start wishing you dead.
For perhaps bodies will be buried
in the basement for all eternity
because of someone betraying
another for all it was worth.
Take heed in this little warning
because it could be you that is
their next victim to end up
buried in the basement below.
But then again no one would miss you
would they if you decided to betray
yet another poor helpless soul who
didn't know what they were getting into.
A contest entry
- Betrayal by Maili Knephthan.
700 points, ended October 26, 36 entries
Gold trophy winner
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Comments
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thank you for entering
this piece is good and i really like it, betrayal does hurt and yes i have thought about burying people in a basement, great job. Good luck and thanks for entering!
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it was not as good as your others but i like it you should write more random demented stuff lol love u ttyl
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"in the basement for all enterity " This sentence the world Enternity should be ETERNITY
Other then this it is a very well written poem and I really enjoyed it. You did a good job on this piece it shows betrayal and hurt. T?hank you for entering and thank you for sharing good luck
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