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In A Cage.

Her script and words,
the pages filled of a journey,
the one, only one takes,
but still keeps going around in circles,
making the same mistakes.
Documenting a life half lived,
with many dreams and aspirations,
thoughts and feelings, locks and keys,
in a cage she wants to be set free.

© winterlights 2009

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about me writing, and me trying to figure out who I am and feeling trapt. some actual interesting stuff will be posted soon!

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