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So alone in this world

Afraid to turn the lights on
not sure of what I'll think,
the mirror has no reflection
when it's dark above the sink.

If no one will love me
then why should I
I have no savior
no need for this strife

Just a flip of the switch
to shine light in the dark
now the mirrors reflection
reveals a broken heart

If I can not love me
then why should you
it's an endless cycle
I can't break through

So alone in this world
So alone inside
Just hurting for someone
to value this life

Dear god I beg
to make me strong
give me the confidence
to continue along.

What did you think, your thoughts I wanna know

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  • Running Blind
    November 30, 2009

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    just a flip of the switch
    to shine light in the dark
    now the mirrors reflections
    reveals a broken heart

    I really like these lines


  • scars of life911
    October 25, 2009

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    You explained how i feel amazingly. This is a very deep write!


  • Aelten
    October 21, 2009

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    Nicely done- an emotional write. I like the turning on the light metaphor, seeing our true self in the mirror. Well done in brevity and rhyme.
    A~


  • forbiddenlove-x
    October 21, 2009
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    i love this poem i have the same feelings.


  • Suicidal-Dreams1
    October 21, 2009
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    I am going through the same feelings. But i think u can love someone even oif u dont love urself

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