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Pietà

Missing image
A lifeless body,
Chiseled from divinity:
Draped in mother’s arms.

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Traditional Senryu 5/7/5

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  • Draig aine gold member
    October 20
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    a most excellent senyru

    holding my breath as you breath life into cold marble

  • Ruben Ortellao
    October 20

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    Terrific !!!

    The famous triangle of marble!! This masterpiece is one of my favorites! (I'm talking about the sculpture!) Now, this ekphrasis....what can I say? ...it's just marvellous! Excellent lines, my friend! Awesome work! Ruben.